A bug I have found is that in the scene where you pick your weapon of choice, choosing the longbow plays the scythe scene, and choosing the scythe acts if you clicked the long bow. There are also various places where the text is cut off towards the bottom going straight to the choices.
On mobile everything cuts off at the bottom. There are places where I can't even read one (or possibly more) of the choices because I can't see them and can't move the page up any further.
That's definitely weird I play tested on both Ios and Android and the scroll bar worked for both some im not sure why its doing that for you but I will look into what I can do to change some things around ♥
For this update, as awesome as it was i found an error. Aiden came with me in the journey yet this (Screenshots) shows up only after the choice to convince C not to fight.
Ah and i don't get why mc is angry with the blacksmith? Maybe it wasn't clear enought? I mean he did called them butterflies but i just don't think that's enought reason to get that angry? And is Aiden never an option when Mc thinks of an Ro after the fight? Or I just didn't get enought affection for it to show up?
Screenshots with Spoilers from the same playthrough
First off thank you SO much for the SS! Ill be fixing them now~
but to answer your other questions your mc was upset because the blacksmith only looked at Sarosh and then hinted at their being 'Butterflies' while basically dissing everyone besides them. .'His gaze flitted momentarily to a familiar face, but the Blacksmith swiftly averted his eyes, only sparing a passing glance at Sarosh. "A couple of butterflies don't mean I'll linger amidst this wretched frog pond,"" So he essentially called everyone else frogs.
After the encounter you only get options to think about the ones who mad an impact on the scene Aiden as adorable as they are only stood behind during the encounter. ♥
Update I found the issue! it was linked to the wrong passage but I fixed it!
Hi! I can't give my character a name, I only get that error warning (like in the picture) and then my character is just referred as "$name" the whole time. Is this something I can fix myself or is it just some unfortunate bug that needs your fixing and updating? I'd like to get this fixed before playing further ahead, it kinda ruins the whole experience :'D
There should've been a pop up prompt if you have popups enabled. But also the next update will be addressing the pop ups all together and turning them into inputs instead! Which will be coming very soon within a couple weeks! Check the last update log I posted for more info!
Just a suggestion but maybe consider adding a option to play off aiden’s flirting as a joke because I don’t wanna romance her but all of the rejection options are imo super cruel
rejecting aiden in anyway isnt going to make them hate you either way because you guys are bestie but I just think I'm a super sarcastic person with my friends so it def plays into their relationship. But ill be more mindful of it in the future
by the way, still havent read this YET, but the art style looks amazing, each look different yet so well made, and the plot itself seems so very interesting and i just omgomg, i cannot wait, this is deffo going to be one of those popular games for sure
Im forcing myself to read the update tomorrow when im actually awake lol but i wanted to say congrats i know how hard you worked on getting the chapter out from your last post. And just btw the art looks soooo good. I didnt think aiden could get hotter but damn. Every RO looks even more enticing and as someone that wasnt really interested in Ciel. Female Ciel looks fierce as hell. It looks AMAZING!!
hiiiiiii im loving the story so far, though i did encounter this problem where i cant use the 'previous' button for any of the profiles
other than that, im loving our 2 ROs so far and i cant wait to meet the others! though if i may ask, can someone tell me more about the poly route of the game ?
Played the revised demo and it's honestly.. better. I loved it. Just neater? I think. Reading it felt smoother and there werent any misgendering bugs from what i saw this time. Soooo... still love Aiden 👀♥️🤣
I convinced him to come with me! You truly did a good job. It's more refined now. And i love the added bits like with Ciel's scene. Im excited to see where you take us on this journey ♥️
One spot when first meeting Ciel after picking she was pissed one line is miss gendered. A suppressed smile played at the corners of her lips before he began speaking. I have noticed other spots like this like this line. You get off of him and help her stand.
I really loved it, the characters are lovely, especially Aiden xD and the little squabbles with him and MC are almost sibling-like :) the sadness with MC's father is almost touchable. I'm looking forward to more about your story :D
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I found a small bug in chapter 2 after selecting the option: "Warn Ciel against escalating this further by exercising your magic at him."
Besides that, I really enjoyed playing your game.
A bug I have found is that in the scene where you pick your weapon of choice, choosing the longbow plays the scythe scene, and choosing the scythe acts if you clicked the long bow. There are also various places where the text is cut off towards the bottom going straight to the choices.
what are the polyroutes?
If there are sexual content, in the same sex terms we can choose to be a bottom or top or it depends on the character? ty
On mobile everything cuts off at the bottom. There are places where I can't even read one (or possibly more) of the choices because I can't see them and can't move the page up any further.
That's definitely weird I play tested on both Ios and Android and the scroll bar worked for both some im not sure why its doing that for you but I will look into what I can do to change some things around ♥
If it helps I'm forced into landscape by the demo. If you tested it portrait orientation things may have snowed up differently enough.
That does! I look into the landscape view~!
Thank you!
Ya on my android I'm put into landscape mode and can't even get past the name your hero screen as there's no input area.
Could you possibly add an option for bigger fontsize?
The text is really small on my laptop's screen.
can i not change my hair and eye color?
Not at the moment, in the story eyes and Hair color are plot locked. Though there will be a section where you can magically alter them.
For this update, as awesome as it was i found an error. Aiden came with me in the journey yet this (Screenshots) shows up only after the choice to convince C not to fight.
Ah and i don't get why mc is angry with the blacksmith? Maybe it wasn't clear enought? I mean he did called them butterflies but i just don't think that's enought reason to get that angry? And is Aiden never an option when Mc thinks of an Ro after the fight? Or I just didn't get enought affection for it to show up?
Screenshots with Spoilers from the same playthrough
First off thank you SO much for the SS! Ill be fixing them now~
but to answer your other questions your mc was upset because the blacksmith only looked at Sarosh and then hinted at their being 'Butterflies' while basically dissing everyone besides them. .'His gaze flitted momentarily to a familiar face, but the Blacksmith swiftly averted his eyes, only sparing a passing glance at Sarosh. "A couple of butterflies don't mean I'll linger amidst this wretched frog pond,""
So he essentially called everyone else frogs.
After the encounter you only get options to think about the ones who mad an impact on the scene Aiden as adorable as they are only stood behind during the encounter. ♥
Update I found the issue! it was linked to the wrong passage but I fixed it!
Hi! I can't give my character a name, I only get that error warning (like in the picture) and then my character is just referred as "$name" the whole time. Is this something I can fix myself or is it just some unfortunate bug that needs your fixing and updating? I'd like to get this fixed before playing further ahead, it kinda ruins the whole experience :'D
There should've been a pop up prompt if you have popups enabled. But also the next update will be addressing the pop ups all together and turning them into inputs instead! Which will be coming very soon within a couple weeks! Check the last update log I posted for more info!
Could you add an option to play this offline? To be able to download the VN/game to be able to play it offline?
Ill definitely look into it and see what I can do!
Just a suggestion but maybe consider adding a option to play off aiden’s flirting as a joke because I don’t wanna romance her but all of the rejection options are imo super cruel
rejecting aiden in anyway isnt going to make them hate you either way because you guys are bestie but I just think I'm a super sarcastic person with my friends so it def plays into their relationship. But ill be more mindful of it in the future
the pc is super similar to a oc named Aesir I made for a discord server I’m in lol. I finally get to play a character exactly as I imagined.
I just found this masterpiece now :0
Aw thank you
omgomgomgomg, i saw this and i cannot wait to read this
by the way, still havent read this YET, but the art style looks amazing, each look different yet so well made, and the plot itself seems so very interesting and i just omgomg, i cannot wait, this is deffo going to be one of those popular games for sure
Thank you! I hope you enjoy!
Fun update! I did notice a lot of pronoun switching with the ROs, but I am excited to see where this story goes!
Thanks for telling me, which route did you play? ♥ (meaning all girls. all men or mixed?)
I tried the mixed route and most of the flipping was changing the women to men
so changing Ciel and Sarosh to Men? I'll be getting on this soon!
same, I played mixed. Ciel and Sarosh's pronouns were sometimes changing to he/him. I really loved your story, can't wait to read what happens next.
Thank you! I have revamped the whole layout and things and I hope ive caught all the slips it should be coming out sometime next week ♥
Im forcing myself to read the update tomorrow when im actually awake lol but i wanted to say congrats i know how hard you worked on getting the chapter out from your last post. And just btw the art looks soooo good. I didnt think aiden could get hotter but damn. Every RO looks even more enticing and as someone that wasnt really interested in Ciel. Female Ciel looks fierce as hell. It looks AMAZING!!
Aw thank you friend! I hope you enjoy getting to know the other character! ♥
This is sooooooo good. I cant wait to read more. I am hooked!
That means so much to me, thank you for reading!
this is really great, I love Ciel so much! Also looking forward to meeting Sarosh, can’t wait!
Thank you for reading!
Cant wait for chapter one!!
I love you! thanks for waiting for me!
Thank you for gracing us with some good reading! Im honestly excited to see my baby aiden again 😭♥️
Liking it so far. The fighting style makes me thing of RWBY. xD And Aiden has all of my heart.
I LOVE RWBY and I was def inspired by volume 1 and 2. I glad you like Aiden!
hiiiiiii im loving the story so far, though i did encounter this problem where i cant use the 'previous' button for any of the profiles
other than that, im loving our 2 ROs so far and i cant wait to meet the others! though if i may ask, can someone tell me more about the poly route of the game ?
Played the revised demo and it's honestly.. better. I loved it. Just neater? I think. Reading it felt smoother and there werent any misgendering bugs from what i saw this time. Soooo... still love Aiden 👀♥️🤣
AWE THANK YOU! Did Aiden end up going with you?! Or did he refuse you?!
I convinced him to come with me! You truly did a good job. It's more refined now. And i love the added bits like with Ciel's scene. Im excited to see where you take us on this journey ♥️
One spot when first meeting Ciel after picking she was pissed one line is miss gendered. A suppressed smile played at the corners of her lips before he began speaking. I have noticed other spots like this like this line. You get off of him and help her stand.
Omg thank you for the catch! Fixed them! If you see anymore please let me know!
Aiden is just an adorable little harlot. Lmao i enjoyed this very much!
^.^ thanks for playing!
Akakmzjsjse, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OMG!!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I really loved it, the characters are lovely, especially Aiden xD and the little squabbles with him and MC are almost sibling-like :) the sadness with MC's father is almost touchable. I'm looking forward to more about your story :D
Awe thank you for such a kind comment!